Stepfather

[Paolo]

You're right.

After going back to the English version and comparing them, it's not a literal translation.

I'm not going to pull the text body, though, as it's still on topic.

I will, however, insert a disclaimer into it.

[Eromenos (imported)]

The introduction in the German adaptation of the idea of eunuchs intermingling with intact boys of a similar age and being sexually available without prejudice to them in reality creates a different alternative universe or alternative society than the one in the original English version. In such a society eunuchs would be a gate for free expression of all adolescent sexuality, by females as well as males. The author of the original story did write that he wanted to introduce an element of bisexuality. This change would open the way for it. Girls would not have to fear sexual contacts with eunuchs, and boys would not be pillored for it, since eunuchs are considered a different sex. The German version ends with Jase about to have his balls and scrotum cut off. Roger has left the room in embarrasment because Jase told the doctor that his stepfather intended to fuck him after he was castrated. The logical continuation would be for Roger to return, to take Jase's balls and scrotum in a bottle as a token of his victory. Then when Jase returned to school, Shawn would want to see what he looked like without balls, would make a date, and then fuck him. He said on the bus when Jase told him that he was going to be castrated, that Jase would soon know whether eunuchs could have orgasms when they were fucked He obviously intended to fuck him. This theme could be developed and would be exciting. But not as exciting for me as the sequel I recommended before.

[Eromenos (imported)]

The introduction in the German adaptation of the idea of eunuchs intermingling with intact boys of a similar age and being sexually available without prejudice to them in reality creates a different alternative universe or alternative society than the one in the original English version. In such a society eunuchs would be a gate for free expression of all adolescent sexuality, by females as well as males. The author of the original story did write that he wanted to introduce an element of bisexuality. This change would open the way for it. Girls would not have to fear sexual contacts with eunuchs, and boys would not be pillored for it, since eunuchs are considered a different sex. The German version ends with Jase about to have his balls and scrotum cut off. Roger has left the room in embarrasment because Jase told the doctor that his stepfather intended to fuck him after he was castrated. The logical continuation would be for Roger to return, to take Jase's balls and scrotum in a bottle as a token of his victory. Then when Jase returned to school, Shawn would want to see what he looked like without balls, would make a date, and then fuck him. He said on the bus when Jase told him that he was going to be castrated, that Jase would soon know whether eunuchs could have orgasms when they were fucked He obviously intended to fuck him. This theme could be developed and would be exciting. But not as exciting for me as the sequel I recommended before.

I posted a suggested scenario as a sequel to the German version, which introduced new ideas. I thought I wiould post it here also as an encourageent to the English writer also

. The German version ends with Jase

demanding that his scrotum be removed along with his balls. Roger gets mad an walks out of the room. The following is how the action might continue:

Re: Der Stiefvater

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It seems to be taking a long time to get a sequel to this story, either the English original or the German adaptation. Perhaps it would be an encouragement to the German writer to make a suggestion. It follows:

Roger has left the room. Martin follows him. "Sir, now you have to witness the operation. Removal of the entire scrotum is a more serious operation. There is a danger of serious bleeding, shock, even damage to the penis. Your stepson can live without fucking but he cannot live without peeing. We need you to witness that we have not made a mistake. Also, he will have to stay in the clinic overnight so that we can check him again in the morning. There is no extra charge for this because since the law gives the boy the choice of how complete his castration will be, it has to give him the means for making the choice. Also, I want you to look Jase in the eye while I am cutting off his balls. I need to know that both of you are determined to go through with this"

Roger returns. Jase is placed standing up on a revolving table between mirrors so that he can see what the doctor is doing. The doctor places a band around Jase's scrotum, and then begins carefully to cut. Jase grimaces but tries to keep a straight face, looking defiantly at Roger. Roger looks angrily back. Jase's balls and scrotum fall in a basin filled with water. When Jase feels the knife cut rhough his scrotum, and hears his balls drop into the basin, he cannot help crying out. He feels shamed. The doctor washes them and puts them in a jar filled with preservative. Jase's name and the date of his castration are written on a label. He tells Roger that he has to keep the balls until Jase is 18. Every eunuch has the right to have his balls buried with him.

The next morning Roger visits Jase in his hospital room. Jase looks badly shaken and bitter but calm.

Roger. "Ok, Kid, you are now a eunuch and you will have to get used to it. I think that it is better that you stay with my eunuch concubine until your crotch heals and you get used to the idea of living without balls. Maybe a week or two. I have told your teacher that you have had your balls and scrotum removed and will take some time to recover. You are excused from school for two weeks. You can come home now if you insist, but if you are reasonable, as you will have to be now that you are a eunuch, you will not want to upset your mother." Jase nods limply, with resignation.

Joe, Roger's eunuch concubine arrives. 'Hi, kid, welcome to the tribe. You will learn that you can be happy as a eunuch. Anyway, now you have no choice. Roger has your balls in a jar. He is basically a good man. He has been fucking me in the ass since I lost my balls, and I love him and I am faithful to him. As two males you were rivals. That is nature. Now you are no longer male and your rivalry his over. If you accept being a eunuch, he will come to love you, and I know now that he feels responsible for seeing that you adjust well and have a happy life."

Jase goes to stay with Joe. Joe is naked in the apartment and he tells Jase he does not need to wear clothes. Eunuchs stay naked when they are with themselves. They do not need to fear aggression. Jase stares at Joe's penis. It looks like a rosebud. It is very short and semi erect and seems to be at least half head. Joe tells him that his penis will also look like that. The shaft shrinks but the head does not and as the skin shrinks it exposes the head. The process makes the eunuch's penis perfect for sucking

Joe tells Jase not to worry that Roger will fuck him. "You are a pussy boy now, but you will never be Roger's pussy boy. He just told you that to put you down." The doctor implanted a chip in his asshole that will send a warning signal alerting the police if he is fucked. The law says that he cannot be fucked before he is 16 and no one who has responsibility for him can fuck him. The chip will be removed on his 16th birthday.

But Roger does have the right to chose the man who will deflower him and to witness the deflowering He says that young eunuchs before the age of 16 satisfy each other orally. His deflowrig will not be rape although he cannot chose his deflowerer. It is important that the right man break him in. He will appreciate that. "I did. My father had me castrated and gave me to Roger. He got to know Roger at one of the orgy parties in the home for young eunuchs. My dad saw how well endowed he was, how affectionate, and how hard he fucked. He thought he would be perfect for deflowering me, and he was. I have never wanted another lover, although I occasionally take other gays in orgies."

Shawn is worried about Jase. He comes to the house looking for him. Roger tells him where he can find Jase. He goes there and meets Joe with Jase. Jase explains that Shawn is his friend and was looking forward to having sex with him after his castration. Joe tells Shawn that he cannot fuck Jase but he will have to wait until he is fully developed as a eunuch, It will be much more fun for him to fuck a real eunuch than just a deballed boy. He tells Jase that he should suck Shawn as a token of accepting his eunuch state and a pledge of a future sexual relation. Jose goes down on his knees and sucks Shawn, who caresses his head and back while he is getting sucked and comforts Jase by telling him that now they can begin to enjoy each other sexually and that he is looking forward to fucking him after his sixteenth birthday. He says he will tell the other boys and young eunuchs that Jase is going to be a terrific pussy boy.

The night of Jase's castration, Roger goes home. He meets Jase's mother at the door. She asks, "Where is Jase? Did he run away?" Roger: "No. He has been nutted. I have his balls here in this jar. But he had to stay in the hospital over night to be checked in the morning, just as precaution. The operation went well. But I want him to stay with a friend until his body heals and he gets over his anger and his shock. I am sure he will be happier as a eunuch, and you were too. But for any male, young or old, losing your balls is traumatic, and he has to be used to the idea that he is now a eunuch and that he will be for the rest of his life." Mother: "Ok, dear, you know best, and I am sure your eunuch friend can help Jase adjust." Roger. "He should come home in about a week."

Jase returns home after a week with a calm, resigned look on his face. He is now a submissive eunuch and accepts it.

In a couple of years, Roger tells jase thathe isfree to move to a home for young eunuchs. It is not a prison. The purpose is to give him privacy and a chance to associate with young fellows like himself. He can return home any time he likes, but he will be happier in the young eunuchs' home. There the young eunuchs normally go naked and they have parties on the weekend to which intact boys and men are invited. They usually become sexual orgies. Roger is an honored guest. Jase loves watching him fuck his friends. And Rogrs loves watching Jase get fucked, especially by very big men.