"Virtual Reality" story feedback

[DeaconBlues (imported)]

Just finished "Virtual Reality" by SSindy Smith, and I liked it. Short, sweet and interesting with a nice twist. It made me think of the movie "The Matrix" sort of, but this "Virtual Reality" is more interesting. I really like the fact that it is well written and clear. Not just a bunch of mindless fuck-fest talk, but a real story. Thankyou for the good work.