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Good concept, and an excellent lead-in to a series. How DID they adapt? Did Steve end up having to submit to a stud, either orally or...? As a eunuch, I'm sure his tongue might be kept busy in a harem. :)

Thank you. More, please.
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we both liked this story a lot. it is young and innocent feeling. tell us more! Jen & Angelo
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Sorry to say that I was a bit disappointed with the story. I guess it was OK, but it seemed to me that it was crudely written. I think that with just a little bit more effort this idea could have been much more interesting and a better story.
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Very good story telling. Really turned me on several times. I'm gay, getting chemically castrated had a little bit of a hardon and a dry ejaculation - first in months. Thanks!
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were do u find the story wrong place wrong time as i cant find it iv only read half of it if u can help thanks
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Hi Im Katie D author of wromng time wrong place. Thanks for all your comments. I will submit next instalment very soon. Just wondered are there any other women out there who like me were initially turned off at their guy giving up his balls so easily without a fight. Thanks
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Hi, Katie ~ This is Jen. I noticed that there was no struggle, but I thought that was what young people sometimes do, like the sultan said I have to and all these other guys are doing it so...

But it was sweet the way he thought about her when he learned he was losing them. And I like the way you turned it in the second chapter, so she is actually turned off by it now.

Oh, and hey, if you get a chance I would love your thoughts, good or bad, on our story from yesterday called There Are Worse Things. Ciao ~ Jen
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Hi, Katie, it's Jen. Please email at angelo7o5 at yahoo dot com and I'll respond to all your questions. I appreciate your comments on the story. Take care ~ Jen
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Unregistered (imported) wrote: Wed Jul 30, 2008 1:11 am Hi Im Katie D author of wromng time wrong place. Thanks for all your comments. I will submit next instalment very soon. Just wondered are there any other women out there who like me were initially turned off at their guy giving up his balls so easily without a fight. Thanks

i'm enjoying the stories too...the paragraph at the end of each story makes one wonder (just a little) if this is real or fantasy...though i must think it's the latter...i wonder how i'd reack in Steve's place...though i want it...i'd think at the end...it would be very stressful...and it's my nature to resist such things.
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