This is a good story. I hope the author continues it. I want to know more about the "artificial gonad simulation gland" that is implanted into Jaysen's body.

Will Jaysen shower with other boys now that he is a nullo? If he does, will he be the first nullo in the class? How will the other boys react to his condition?

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_215100axlotl.htm

Hope we see part 2 very soon. Good link into the dune world.

Seldom have time to read stories anymore. But the comment about Dune caught my eye - Dune Fan here. So I read this one. A nice start. Needs lots of stuff added to it, like more of the story. Hurry up!

I was never able to make it through enough of Dune to even understand it.

First, I'd like to thank everyone for the positive feedback. It's nice to hear that people enjoyed the story and got what I'd intended to be a rather oblique Dune reference.

I don't think it would spoil anything to say that a shower scene is neither the forum for discovery nor the avenue gratuitous sex. Both will happen once I get some exposition done. Unfortunately I suck at exposition so it may not be as polished as I'd like.

I enjoyed the story and look forward to seeing just what this transplanted gland does - does it stop the eunuchoid effects upon the body, which still preventing puberty and development? Or does it do something else? Please continue.

Yes, good start to the story. I too look forward to part two! Thanks for writing!

Enjoyed the story very much. Have read Dune a number of times and love it.