Axlotl By: Anonymous

[curious_guy (imported)]

This is a good story. I hope the author continues it. I want to know more about the "artificial gonad simulation gland" that is implanted into Jaysen's body.

Will Jaysen shower with other boys now that he is a nullo? If he does, will he be the first nullo in the class? How will the other boys react to his condition?

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_215100axlotl.htm

[BroBear (imported)]

Hope we see part 2 very soon. Good link into the dune world.

[kristoff]

Seldom have time to read stories anymore. But the comment about Dune caught my eye - Dune Fan here. So I read this one. A nice start. Needs lots of stuff added to it, like more of the story. Hurry up!

[Paolo]

I was never able to make it through enough of Dune to even understand it.

[Unregistered (imported)]

First, I'd like to thank everyone for the positive feedback. It's nice to hear that people enjoyed the story and got what I'd intended to be a rather oblique Dune reference.

I don't think it would spoil anything to say that a shower scene is neither the forum for discovery nor the avenue gratuitous sex. Both will happen once I get some exposition done. Unfortunately I suck at exposition so it may not be as polished as I'd like.

[Paolo]

I enjoyed the story and look forward to seeing just what this transplanted gland does - does it stop the eunuchoid effects upon the body, which still preventing puberty and development? Or does it do something else? Please continue.

[blondboy (imported)]

Yes, good start to the story. I too look forward to part two! Thanks for writing!

[gandalf (imported)]

Enjoyed the story very much. Have read Dune a number of times and love it.