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One often wonders in many of the stories here that read like this, just how much of it is based upon real-life experiences. Of course, it IS the Fiction Archive, so...we can only wonder.
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I liked the story, too. I was sorry for poor Steve* but now it seem he is going to get some well deserved attention. Question is, will he enjoy it?

* well, not really
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based on the ending of part 2:

"I hope my experiences are of some interest to you. If you would like to hear more please leave some feedback and I will try to put part 3 together. This will focus on how Steve and I adapted to his duties in the harem and the attention he received as one of the few white eunuchs, from not only the women but also the sheik and his guests."

please, please, PLEASE, continue with the story...

am enjoying it very much, and am kind of fantasizing of being Steve and looking forward to his experiences

thanks so much for sharing!
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Please, please, please send the part 3 ASAP
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Hi, Katie ~

This is Jen. Just want to add my encouragement here ~ a lot of us are waiting for chapter 3! Please?
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Hi Jen and others, just wanted to say thanks for the feedback and support, very kind of you all. Ive submitted part 3 now so hopefully it will appear soon. Dont suppose there are any women out there that have had a similar experience to mine. Thanks again, Katie D
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IF there's a Part 4, please watch your paragraph breaks.

Thanks.
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dear Katie D.

since reading the first part of your exceptional experience, a question burns my mind all the time.....that is, why did you and your husband not escape from there when you got the letter or offer of castration from the sheikh's office? afterall, you were not local there and could easily come back to England, couldn't you? or Steve may try to change his job there. why did you not consider any of those other options? what did make you so helpless in that situation? will you please tell us the reason. love

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Hi, Katie ~ This is Jen. I read your new chapter and your latest message here, and I understand that you want to write about returning to London and what it is like for both of you there. But...as another woman, I have been curious since your first chapter about those studs that were available to you. Like, even when Steve was being cut, you were checking them out, impressed by their equipment. Maybe it is just me, but I want to know what they would be like! You did find out, didn't you? I mean, I definitely would.

Thanks for continuing the story! ~ Jen
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Hi Ani thanks for your thoughts.Shadeen our cleaner told us when we got the letter that the authorities would have already put a stop on Steves passport. As he had a dual passport and was only a few months into a 2 year contract with his firm he was eligible to serve as a eunuch. Failure to attend for castration would lead to arrest and a long prison sentence and he would still be castrated. At the end of the 2 year contract Steve was allowed to stop eunuch duties and leave the country. The castration was compulsory and not an offer.As I have said in my story Steves failure to fight for his balls has been hard for me to accept though I must admit it would probably been in vain. His view is that the threat of castration was such a mind numbing emotion that all he could think of was to get it over with. If I was in your position Im sure I would ask the same questions. Have you experience of castration? Best wishes, Katie
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