A Model Pussy by Underwriter

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I hope that when the writer returns to this story he will show that the hero is proud of his pussy, that he enjoys it and enjoys discovering its advantages. He should also show a fascination with penis and a desire to have one inhim. When he getsone,he should enjoy it immensibly, moan and groan and climax, while kissing his male lover.
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Eromenos (imported) wrote: Mon Aug 04, 2008 11:30 am I hope that when the writer returns to this story he will show that the hero is proud of his pussy, that he enjoys it and enjoys discovering its advantages. He should also show a fascination with penis and a desire to have one inhim. When he getsone,he should enjoy it immensibly, moan and groan and climax, while kissing his male lover

This story has a fascinating theme and I cannot wait to read Part 2. I have some ideas of how it might be developed. But I really cannot suggest anything until I know what the author's intention was. Why did the people responsible for the hero's transformation do it? What do they plan for him?
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Eromenos (imported) wrote: Mon Aug 04, 2008 11:30 am I hope that when the writer returns to this story he will show that the hero is proud of his pussy, that he enjoys it and enjoys discovering its advantages. He should also show a fascination with penis and a desire to have one inhim. When he getsone,he should enjoy it immensibly, moan and gr
Eromenos (imported) wrote: Tue Aug 12, 2008 5:37 pm oan and climax, while kissing his male lover

This story has a fascinating theme and I cannot wait to read Part 2. I have some ideas of how it might be developed. But I really cannot suggest anything until I know what the author's intention was. Why did the people responsible for th
e hero's transformation do it? What do they plan for him

Well, maybe an initial suggestion is possible. How about this: The hero is looking with amazement and shock at his pussy. A doctor comes up to him, and says: As you see, there has been a major change to your body. We built you a pussy to serve men and gave you a sexual orientation corresponding to that. You will now find males attractive and want sexual intercourse with them. Your pussy is for that. But you have not feminized you in any other way. In fact, we have made you more of a man, a man's man. You will notice the two large outer lips, or labia. They were made from the skin of your balls and have the same sensitivity. You will love to rub them and have them rubbed. Then there are inner lips that were made from your foreskin. They are more sensitive. At the top of the cleft is what looks like a small penis. That is your clitoris. It has made from the knob of your penis, or the meatus, but it is much more sensitive. You can feel it tingling now because you are sexually excited. At the base of the cleft is a shallow hole. It is shallow because it is blocked by a membrane. That is your hymen. You are a virgin.Your first intact male lover will have to break it to reveal to you what is behind. You feel a throbbing and wetness within. Your vagina or fuck hole, contracts and exudes lubrication when you are excited. The contractions will grip the penis of your lover and stroke it. The lubrication will make it easier for him to pump into you. The size of your outer labia indicates the strength of the muscles linking your cunt and it shows that your vagina will be able to grip your lover tightly. Unlike most born women, you will have real vaginal orgasm. When you are fucked, you will get two orgasms. First, a clitoral orgasm, an acute tingling, and then a vaginal orgasm that will be like an earthquake.

We have given you an exceptional man's body and and exceptional pussy. We looked a long time to find a prick worthy of that pussy. He is standing naked in the next room. The model looks. There is a big muscular man, as big and muscular as he and maybe a little more so. He has a hard penis a foot long and three inches around. The model protests. "I am big and strong but this pussy you have given me is soft and sensitive. That guy will kill me if he rams that huge cock into my hole." The reshapers say: "No. You will be able to take it. Your pussy is designed to take the largest cock and the hardest fucking. Your intincts have also been redesigned. You cannot resist. You might be able to beat him in a fight. But your body will want to surrender, to take it, no matter how much it hurts. When he shoots his semen into you, it will be the most exciting thing you have ever felt. Yuu will feel satisfied. It will be the only thing that can satisfy you."
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It has been a long time. I keep hoping the author will deliver the promised Part II
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