Joshs' Will Robinson

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StefanIsMe (imported)
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Joshs' Will Robinson

Post by StefanIsMe (imported) »

Wow, you are back, with a vengence!

Thank you so much for continuing this. What started as a quick little setup has really taken shape. Very well done, Josh. You are exciting to read, every single time; you really do have a knack for making me suprised by what you have thought up next, and, just as important, writing it in a fun way.

I definitely jump when I see your name on the new submissions list.

Thank you again, and I DEFINITELY hope to see more!! I know it's a lot of work to write, but believe me, it's apreciated by many. Check my contact info for my email if you wish, I'd love to swap ideas.

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/D/ea_174048danger_w.htm

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/D/ea_193550danger_w.htm

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/D/ea_225642danger_w.htm
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All three parts are very good. When I read part two, I expected Will to wake up already nullified but what Josh wrote is better. I am really anticipating more parts.
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It might be interesting if Davy tries to prevent Will from returning to the planet where his family is and is transported with Will.
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Part four is also very good. I wonder if Will will try to keep his new status a secret from his family.
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Will Uncle Rex have sex with Will? If he does, will Will enjoy it? How will Will tell Dr. Smith that he wants Dr. Smith to make love to him?
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