The Procedure, PURE slammr

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StefanIsMe (imported)
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The Procedure, PURE slammr

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Yep... distilled and chilled.

Yum 🙏

A particularly well fleshed out shorty from you, Slammr. I have to say you edged that one really well... it really worked on somthing I like in these stories; A realization of impending significant change, with past behaviours active right until the moment of change, and sudden, distinct resolution after the change. And, of course, with a quintessentially Slammrian clarification at the end 🚬

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/P/ea_155338the_proc.htm

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This story is just great!

As usual, Slammr twists and turns and makes you wonder until the very end. Excellent work!
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