Zelamir: Traitor's Son a great story

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Zelamir: Traitor's Son a great story

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Zelamir, for those of us who enjoy Pueros, Nathan, et al, your Traitor's Son is an equal contribution. Am looking forward anxiously for your next addition . . . keep it up.🙏
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‘The Traitor’s Son’ is essentially a complete rewrite by myself, Pueros, of a story originally titled ‘Sejanus’ by Zelamir.

My rewrite is written in my own style because I fussily cannot perform the deed in any other way. I’ve also substantially expanded the text and made significant additions and changes to subplots, whilst maintaining the main thread, namely what happens to young Marius.

Zelamir has approved what I’m doing but alas can no longer keep a watchful eye on the project. I therefore just hope that my rewrite does his original story justice!

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Pueros, indeed, a very gracious and generous statement. I thouught I was familier with the story. Your version is done in your customary supreme mannor which pleases all.
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Many thanks again for your kind words, John.

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