Ancient Secret, by Kortpeel

[JesusA (imported)]

Another masterpiece by an incredible author. Exactly 250 words, and a perfect story. There’s not a comma that could be moved without reducing the quality.

Kortpeel writes on a wide variety of themes, but his stories are invariably imaginative and well-constructed. Check this one out to see how a true master performs: Ancient Secret (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_110519ancient_.htm). Then check the author index to find more of his work….

[curious_guy (imported)]

Another masterpiece by an incredible author. Exactly 250 words, and a perfect story. There’s not a comma that could be moved without reducing the quality.

I am a little confused by this story. It says that Dan was in a motorcycle accident and then it said that Stan lost both testicles in the motorcycle accident. Did they both have accidents or was it Dan who lost both balls?

[Kortpeel (imported)]

I am a little confused by this story. It says that Dan was in a motorcycle accident and then it said that Stan lost both testicles in the motorcycle accident. Did they both have accidents or was it Dan who lost both balls?

Damn! Damn! DAMN!

You are absolutely right. It's just a plain stupid mistake. It should be Dan who

lost both testicles in the motorcycle accident.

If the moderator could kindly change that in the last paragraph I would much appreciate it.

My apologies for the error and thanks to Jesus and others who took the trouble to comment.

Regards

Kortpeel

[Paolo]

Damn! Damn! DAMN!

You are absolutely right. It's just a plain stupid mistake. It should be Dan who

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lost both testicles in the motorcycle accident.

If the moderator could kindly change that in the last paragraph I would much appreciate it.

My apologies for the error and thanks to Jesus and o
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thers who took the trouble to comment.

Regards

Kortpeel DONE.

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