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Need help, comments on experimental story index page
Re: Need help, comments on experimental story index page
Lighten the gray bars with the title a bit.
Descriptions should be in black.
Titles of stories should be in bold face.
The green header bar is too "pine green"; it should be more "lime".
And a naked picture of you at the upper right corner would be nice, too.

Descriptions should be in black.
Titles of stories should be in bold face.
The green header bar is too "pine green"; it should be more "lime".
And a naked picture of you at the upper right corner would be nice, too.
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Riverwind (imported)
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Re: Need help, comments on experimental story index page
Made some changes 
Lime? I don't think so. This isn't the 70s.
Lighter on the title bar? That will make it pretty low contrast
Right on Paolo
Lime? I don't think so. This isn't the 70s.
Lighter on the title bar? That will make it pretty low contrast
Right on Paolo
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Re: Need help, comments on experimental story index page
While I'm sure it is not displaying well in all situations (see image), the over all look is OK.
With cleanup so it W3C validates it would be fine.
http://home.earthlink.net/~imagepool/EA028.gif
( 70% actual size )
With cleanup so it W3C validates it would be fine.
http://home.earthlink.net/~imagepool/EA028.gif
( 70% actual size )
Re: Need help, comments on experimental story index page
That green bar reminds me of a fridge we used to have in the 70's.

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Re: Need help, comments on experimental story index page
Paolo wrote: Thu Mar 04, 2004 5:51 am That green bar reminds me of a fridge we used to have in the 70's.
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Was that the colour of the fridge, or what was in the fridge?
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Re: Need help, comments on experimental story index page
Would you be offended if I said I think it's awful.
It's too much contrast between the background and the main page and then too little contrast withing the listing. Hurts my eyes to try to read it.
It's not a unified page, it's two parts and the differences make it look like two jammed together pages.
Dave
It's too much contrast between the background and the main page and then too little contrast withing the listing. Hurts my eyes to try to read it.
It's not a unified page, it's two parts and the differences make it look like two jammed together pages.
Dave
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Re: Need help, comments on experimental story index page
I think the presentation and use of colour is very nice; it looks good.
On a very small point, I think the dots (.) between each word should be a bit larger, I was rather intrigued into how a pair of straight testicles might look
. The hyperlinks worked well, I think it is good work!
On a very small point, I think the dots (.) between each word should be a bit larger, I was rather intrigued into how a pair of straight testicles might look