Good story, well written and unusual. Well worth reading a few times. Thanks to the author and I hope that they write more

Suspense.

Good prose.

Good plot.

The ending is perfect, leaving the readers hoping for a sequel.

Well done darkboy.

-NN

I'd like to add my own congratulations to darkboy for this one. A very well-written play on the bite-it-off fantasy. I'm looking forward to anything more darkboy may contribute in the future. Well done!