Good story so far, I think it is working up to being a story that is different to any others here which says a lot. I look forward to part 2 etc. I hope it does not end here like some multi part stories. Strong stsrt anyway and better than I could do!

Thank you! I promise I'll do my best not to ruin it.

Just read part two .YES YES YES A classic in the making, and I have read every story on the board (except some of the foreign language ones). Great character and plot development.

Thanks

I am travelling abroad for three weeks so the story is on hiatus, but I continue to gather material for the next chapters.

How is part 3 shapping up? I hope you have not abandoned it! It is an excellent story so far. I would recomend it to all.