I made a new start of a story, maybe I will finish it one day or someone else could write the end. I have many more ideas with more boys, men or females involved and I make some pics myself. Tell me what you think.

The three young witches were gathering at the new pub in the eastern part of the town. Anna was 24 now and well built with short brown hair. Marta was long with a cute face blond hair and only 21. Jennifer was the eldest, 28, medium length and had a curly cute nose with bright almond eyes. The were gossiping about all the cute boys they met last week at the big party. All the girls were bisexual and besides being a witch they loved to play sexual games with each other and now and then invited a few beautiful boys to join their parties. They were gossiping about the new witch Jossy, who told she liked boys only that were willing to give up there penis to her. When the girls drank more and more witchwine Marta told she had stolen a video from Jossy. All the girls were giggling and asking if they could see it. Marta said come on you guys you will not like this at all, her head turned red, it was clear she must now what was on the video.

In the beach house from Jennifer they seated next to each other on the coach, it was warm and well decorated. Marta put the video in the recorder and the movie started.

I told you will not like said Marta as an excuse for what was to come. One boy was kneeling behind a penisguillotine. His big and fat cock was sticking out to the ceiling. Three girls were walking naked around them. They were making lots of comments on the boy.

You know you deserve this Josh, you secretly sneeked in at our all girl party, we made you join our party and did everything to please you, you promised to do anything for us, anything. We know about your secret Josh. Besides we need your cock for our girl party’s.

Jossy took the rope from the top of the guillotine while a small older girl got a young man from the other room. All three girls started sucking this boys cock while enjoying it very much. They entered 5 rubber rings about the boys cock one by one. Jossy bound the rope to the last ring at the base of the young mans cock.

All the young witches started to get glowing faces now and were looking at each other without saying any words.

Marta finally said any more wine girls? We want to watch said Anna and Jennifer nodded.

The video went on.

Jossy said: “Gwen, you will start spanking this young man’s penis very slowly, like tickling.”. We will be enjoying Josh’s cock, we will tickle his balls, stroke his tip and his frenulum. Do not try to remove your cock Josh or we will bite hard in it. Josh laughed sheepishly, he new he couldn’t get away anymore, he was bound to the guillotine with legs and arms.

Then start spanking the young man’s cock harder and harder. When it finally softens the rings will fall of one by one, guess what happens then. You better start hurrying then Josh it will be your last cum if you can make it. She whispered in the other girls ears: “better not stimulate his to much, we will chop it of when it is at its hardest. We only need hard cocks for all our coming all girl parties”. “What were you talking to the girls”, asked Josh with trembling voice. Ohhh I was just telling the girls you could join our all girl parties soon, replied Jossy.

The three witches had red faces by now. Anne was stroking herself, while Jennifer was kissing Marta. The door opened suddenly. Jossy was standing there she looked around and saw her video on the tele………

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K

I tried to post it there 2 times but with no luck

Dirk

dirk12345 (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 22, 2008 6:47 am I tried to post it there 2 times but with no luck

Dirk

All stories go into the "Tank" where they are held for review by Plix. If he approves, it goes up; otherwise not. If you don't see it in a few days, send him a PM, asking if/why it has been either rejected or not put up. Guidelines will give a great idea of what he takes.

Thanks I will consider it and try writing a better one

dirk12345 (imported) wrote: Tue Jan 22, 2008 6:57 am Thanks I will consider it and try writing a better one

You need to divide your story into paragraphs. You also have some grammar errors. You often use "there" instead of "their".

WordPerfect has a grammar checker that will catch many errors. If you look around, you can find version 12 for about $6.00 plus shipping. If you run Windows Vista, you need version X3. Be careful about buying X3 from low cost vendors. I bought it from 5dollarsoftware.com and what I got was not usable as anything other than a 30 day demo.

Try http://www.google.com/advanced_product_search.

Not all witches are female! My old roommate was a male witch...actually he called himself a fairy

Technically (the way it was explained to me!)

Witch - a person who worships nature and the earth and promises to do no harm. The pentagram points upward as a sign they worship higher powers. Can be male or female

Warlock - a person who worships a mythical person known as Satan, and can inflict pain and suffering on other living creatures in worship. Can be male or female. The pentagram points down word toward towards the center of the earth which is the supposed home of hell.

Perhaps you can plan out the story, and then when you go to write it start in the middle or eliminate the first page or two.

example...

There was laughter and small talk as people were gathering. One was about to gain entrance to the coven, and another was about to have his penis sacrificed.

Eliminate much of your writing we don't need to be told they are young and then given an age.

We don't need to be told they have a specific hair color...if it does not move the story forward then take it out.

Now you can mention things in passing like ... Suzie pulled her brown hair back over her ear, so she could stare at the new girl with out being obvious.

thanks for all the big help. I will try to rewrite it when I have more time. But if someone else likes it feel free to make a (for us) happy ending.

Dirk

dirk12345 (imported) wrote: Wed Jan 23, 2008 10:31 am thanks for all the big help. I will try to rewrite it when I have more time. But if someone else likes it feel free to make a (for us) happy ending.

Dirk

We'll reserve it for you! It is your baby...

I thought Rosemary had the baby.

Which witch was she, or did she switch?

This thread is giving me my own story idea. I won't steal the baby. Have to go now, the muse is loose and I have to catch it. It so rarely comes around anymore.

And the story has nein Nazis, not nine, nein!

Just stopped in to say Gesundheit.

My underwear is a little tight too.

-NeinNaziYahLittleNuts