Hi All.

can any one help I am writing a story about a man who collects the female clitoris for his specimen collection.

what I want to know is it better to write the story all complete or write it in instalments

Jenny

I would think it all depends on the length of your story. If it can be read comfortably in one sitting, one installment should do. If it's going to be a mini series, then there should be several.

Are you ever going to turn around and show us what you got out of the frig. The suspense is killing me.

Hairless (imported) wrote: Tue Jul 31, 2007 7:23 am Are you ever going to turn around and show us what you got out of the frig. The suspense is killing me.

I think if i turn around you may be a bit disappointed, as One guy once said Hay Girl you almost got a hand full there.…:(

Any way back to the story, I did write one story and if I cut it in half it was quite exciting and in a way left every one in suspense wondering did she or did she not.…

If I had gone all the way and sent the complete story, and did an ending, I think the ending would be what every one would have expected would happen to the girl.

And thanks for your impute Hairless mush appreciated

jenny

It is always better to write / publish in one piece if at all possible. This provides continuity, as well as retention of readership - often I will not bother looking for sequelae unless something absolutely demands it. Additionally, most authors here who start what are supposed to be serials never get beyond number one, sometimes number two, and one nevers hears from them again.

kristoff wrote: Tue Jul 31, 2007 10:52 am It is always better to write / publish in one piece if at all possible. This provides continuity, as well as retention of readership - often I will not bother looking for sequelae unless something absolutely demands it. Additionally, most authors here who start what are supposed to be serials never get beyond number one, sometimes number two, and one nevers hears from them again.

I definitely agree with the flying nun. I personally like a story that has an ending instead of just hanging. You can always go with the predicted end and then add in some twist that makes the reader think, " wow, I didn't see that coming". Just my two bits worth.

kristoff wrote: Tue Jul 31, 2007 10:52 am / publish in one piece if at all possible. .

thanks Kristoff,

one more question if I may, how do I access old stories as in the page i access the new ones it says one to sixty.

by the way love the outfit,

Jenny

Did you read the "Witherstone Witch" stories on the board? They're really fun & interesting and include the collection of clits.

jenny (imported) wrote: Tue Jul 31, 2007 10:44 am I think if i turn around you may be a bit disappointed, as One guy once said Hay Girl you almost got a hand full there.…:(

Any way back to the story, I did write one story and if I cut it in half it was quite exciting and in a way left every one in suspense wondering did she or did she not.

If I had gone all the way and sent the complete story, and did an ending, I think the ending would be what every one would have expected would happen to the girl.

And thanks for your impute Hairless mush appreciated

jenny

Jenny, I'm never disappointed. You are also assuming too much. I just appreciate attractive people. From the perfection of what you do show, I pretty much know what's on the other side, except for your smile. I'm just playing with you a little, I don't even expect to see your smile. People make too much out of the size of certain parts and that is not what is important. It's the whole package and most of that isn't seen. The rest of the package that my frog is sitting on is very lovely also. Any way, back to your subject.

Have you ever seen the movie, "Arabian Nights"? It's about a woman that had to keep her story going for many days, to keep from being killed by her husband that she was telling the story to. She had to end each night's story with a little teaser. That way her husband wouldn't kill her so he could find out what happened. This is a good way to tell a story if you have a lot to say. What Kristoff says is true though. If you do tell a story this way, you have to follow it to the end.

Hash (imported) wrote: Wed Aug 01, 2007 1:03 pm Did you read the "Witherstone Witch" stories on the board? They're really fun & interesting and include the collection of clits.

Hi Hash I cannot find it can you send me the link

love Jen

jenny (imported) wrote: Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:51 pm

Hi Hash I cannot find it can you send me the link

love Jen

sorry I just found it