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Unfinished Stories *** SPOILER *** (sort of!)

Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2002 3:01 pm
by Philo (imported)
I have read some really great stories here that were unfortunately never finished! Since they were posted more that a year ago I'm afraid I'll never know how they come out!

THE BOY KING by Nara is one example. Naqee was a beautiful 12 year old king. But I'm sorry to say he was also a spoild brat who enjoyed castrating other boys! Talk about, "Does not play well with others!" Anyway he had the time of his life castrating the equally beautiful 14 year old Tajmmal. Tajmmal didn't like that one little bit and so I would have thought there would have been some hard feelings between the two boys!

But Naqee said something like, "Gee I'm sorry about castrating you. I guess that wasn't very nice." and Tajmmal seemed to forgive him! However Tajmmal is a bit of a "live wire" and becomes so enraged when he sees Naqee presented with his own severed balls and sack as a trophy that he rapes his new friend. However after the rape they "kiss and make up"!

I was wondering if Tajammal was sincere. The two boys were ploting together to overthrow Tajmmal's evil older brother but I was wondering if Tajmmal wasn't just setting up Naqee to castrate the young king! I know I shouldn't feel this way but if ever there was a boy who deserved to be gelded it was Naqee! It would have been a taste of his own medicine. But I'll never know how it ended becouse that is were it ended! It was never finished!

CASTRATION CLINIC is also a great story but very different from BOY KING. It's about a young boy named Erik who is taken to see a doctor by his mother. His mother is concerned about his masturbating and wet dreams.

The doctor has an excellent reputation but he is really a sicko who wants to castrate Erik for the fun of it! He convinces the mother that it must be done for her boy's own good. Needless to say the boy does not want to be gelded! The doctor tells the boy that given his condition castration is required by law. If the boy doesn't submit he is told he'll be arrested and his balls will be taken by force!

This intrigued me because I was able to believe that not so very long ago a few boys like Erik actually were put in such situations!

But the story ends as Erik (in tears) is being prepped for the operation! What happened next? Does a good guy save the boy at the last second or does the doctor actually get away with the boy's balls? If he does lose his balls how will Erik react seeing them taken from him? How will he feel about being given back to his mother and being taken home as a eunuch?

These stories are incredable! They deserve to be finished! You can't just let them end with out us know how it all comes out!

Re: Unfinished Stories *** SPOILER *** (sort of!)

Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2002 4:51 pm
by Paolo
Unfinished stories are always a letdown, I know. Several other readers have mentioned this in the past. Failing all else, some members have even written endings to such stories.

It's usually unknown why an author just up and vanishes and never finishes a story line. Also, just a reminder since we're on the subject, that any Author should feel free to continue or finish a story that has been abandoned.

DO attempt to contact the author, however. If there's no reply nor any way to do it, then take that as a yes.

:p

Re: Unfinished Stories *** SPOILER *** (sort of!)

Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2002 9:59 pm
by Erik (imported)
I happend to have writen a (if I do say so myself) rather good ending to the clinic story. Look up either ERIK or ERIK2175 in the Authores area and find my vertion of the story. I did not change anything in the first parts and wrote the last chapter.