I've really been enjoying how this story is developing; it's got me eager to learn how everything will turn out. Great job!

Another great story - well done charlieje

Thanks for the comments, folks.

But please remember, this has been a joint effort. This is Bboy's story, his inspiration. all I have done was the wordsmithing. Without Bboy it never would have happened.

And you're both doing a fine job of it.

:p

This story, each part, is just unrelentingly cool. Thanks again to both of you guys.

Excellent story. Can't wait for the next installment.

Sorry to sound like a broken record here, but part 11 was fantastic, living up to all the eager anticipation. Thanks yet again to both of you.

He really (as far as the story goes) got it cut off. I, for one, was hoping for a last minute reprieve for Tim...but the story is still great.

I have to join the crowd in congratulating Charlieje on this story. He's done a particularly good job in describing Tim's conflicts in getting something done that he has to have done, but knows he'll regret. And, as always with Charlieje, it's a love story, too, and not just a "cut them (or it) off and get it over with" story.

Don

I have really enjoyed the story. Would it be possible to get chapter 12 back? For a while yesterday, there was an extra chapter 4 that actually retrieved chapter 12. i rather suspect that someone deleted the extra without looking. Now the file for chapter 12 is missing though the index entry is there.

Bill