Nathan's done it again with a super indeepth story about slaves and their lives under a new owner -- just because it can be done. Profound, erotic, horrifying -- all Nathan's credits. Enjoy.

I just love Nathan's stories too!! I was so happy to see he'd finally wrote another one! I'd been dying to see more of his writings.

Awesome story once again, more power to you pen!! Superb charecterisation and erotisism. I really hope you are going to write some more stories as you do such a good job. I would not presume to suggest story lines to you unsolicited as you may not appreciate people suggesting what to write, but if you do welcome positive feedback I am happy to eborate on what parts I personaly enjoyed the most.

I apprecaited the feedback...it means a great deal to an author when they find out that something they have worked on for a while is enjoyed by at least someone. I would certainly enjoy knowing what specifics were more stimulating than others...sometimes I debate what I'm going to do, and I never know really until the words start flowing. This story deals with a broad spectrum of ages in an historical setting, and I debated for a long time about deleting some of it. It was almost called Three for the Knife instead of Five. I hadn't written anything to this series in a very long time, but it seemed time and I was in the mood so I just went with it. Still, I wasnt sure how young to go with it; historically slaves of all ages were deballed, but I wasn't comfortable and yet it seemed historically accurate to the setting and more 'realistic' to write it the way I did, and it made the patriach just a little more 'evil' by doing it that way. Still, I wasn't sure. As it was, I finally let it go as it is, and hopefully the archive readers enjoyed the read.

-Nathan

Nathan, your musings reflect your creative process all of which we look forward to, accept, honor, and relish. In my humble opinion, I wonder if in another life, you lived in Ayzintion and did the things of which you write so eloquently, honestly, sincerely, and with such accuracy of the suspense of such delicate situations in a youth's life whom you descirbe so convincingly they are like brothers to us before they get denutted.