Really enjoyed this (have also been in some b/w

relationships). Would really love to see a sequel.

A lot of different interesting ways it could go,

including some alternate endings from the one

so far. I mean, just because you're a bottom doesn't

mean you CAN'T produce an heir (it just means

you won't enjoy it as much); I can't see the Dad

giving up THAT easy.

I liked the story line and I think that the author has talent. There didn't appear to be any spelling or grammatic errors, somebody also took some pride in their presentation.

Well done and I hope we read more from you soon.