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Hallo,

I am the author of "Amazonen - die Wiederauferstehung" and I am thinking about how to continue the stories.

Isabella will later on establish a totalitarian state under her rule.

One point I am not sure about, as I wrote she is a psychopathic man-hater and in her state men will be surpressed similar as she practize it in the second part of the story on her own property.

Although she is a man hater, I tend to let her make differences between men and let collaborate her with some men if there is a good opportunity to get out an advantage for her own plans.

Otherwise it's more difficult to let her come out as the winner of a civil war.

At the moment I would prefer that she selects loyal and/or good workers on her land and keeps them in suppression, but rewards them by slight improvement of their status while killing only the ones she hates more bestialically as described.

Maybe in another chapter she even falls in love with a man who is of course enslaved by her and will have some agonies.

What I want to ask is, what would you prefer a story that goes on with a group of woemn which tries to get rid of all males or with a male-hating but rational movement who tries to enslave males, but dont want to kill them all over the world regardless what they did in thier life?

greetings
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