Brett's UN-lucky Jock

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Brett's UN-lucky Jock

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Wow oh wow. This is exactly the kind of story I come to the archive for, and sadly these days appears once in a blue moon. And I am gay, though this involves a woman getting back at the 'cocky' jock without any gay material at all (so, OK, I'd have liked it better if it had been a gay guy humiliating the hung str8 jock - but this one still turned me on 1000% more than the gay stories usually found here).

I guess I like the stories here which are like an "ultimate extension" of the mega-hung-str8-jock humiliation/revenge stories elsewhere. Given these seem to be the most popular fantasies amongst gay stories generally, it does surprise me that there aren't more here in their natural "no holds barred" home. Because it's the humiliation FANTASY that does it for me, I often find that stories here turn me off a bit towards the end - when they often turn to blood, pain, etc, which aren't my thing. So a foot long cocky jock being publicly reduced to a half inch by a magic shrinking cream is pretty much bullseye for me!

I'd have liked it to last longer - both the shrinking process, and more 'post-effect-humiliation' descriptions bringing him down further as he is forced to display his micro-endowment for various reasons. And of course, I personally would have loved to see him forced into submissive gay sexual situations too ... but perhaps that is all another story ... one I hope we may see one day ;) .

Thanks very much Anonymous, I hope you will write more in this vein and that you have inspired others to bulk up what is currently a woefully under-represented fantasy terrain.

Universal Peace and Hello in all known languages,

Al

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