Kortpeel has done it again. Completely different in tone from two stories which he has just recently submitted. Great twists and turns in the plot. Not a single word out of place. Great story!
Kortpeel recently lamented that there were not enough straight stories submitted to the Archive in recent months. Hes filling the gap with some of the best stories yet. Lets hope he can keep up the good work.
Finding the Cause
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Re: Finding the Cause
Great story! I like the surprise, humorous ending, although I must admit I liked his original fetish better. ;>) Im not sure Id want to lose mine (fetish, that is).
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Re: Finding the Cause
Bravo! Bravo!
I must say that this story is a little masterpiece. Wonderful plot development and tone. What a ticklish story!
Great take on a recurent theme in our culture, reincarnation and past life experiences. Seems that those who beleve in that stuff think there were fromer Viking Warriors or kings. Why not a simple fisherman or taylor? The author takes this one step furhter. There were lots of eunuchs in past histroy. I wonder where those people are all now? Writing for the Archive?
Thanks for an origional well written story!
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I must say that this story is a little masterpiece. Wonderful plot development and tone. What a ticklish story!
Great take on a recurent theme in our culture, reincarnation and past life experiences. Seems that those who beleve in that stuff think there were fromer Viking Warriors or kings. Why not a simple fisherman or taylor? The author takes this one step furhter. There were lots of eunuchs in past histroy. I wonder where those people are all now? Writing for the Archive?
Thanks for an origional well written story!
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Got2