Subj: Regarding The Last Orgasm.

Date: 8/8/2004 10:36:36 AM Eastern Daylight Time

From: BryanS616

To: michaelovsky@yahoo.com.au

Dear Michael (?)

You have some spelling issues, but more importantly, you have a delightful style to your writing, with a nice, fresh touch, and wry sense of humor. As an enthusiastic EA contributor myself, I find that so many people's offerings are pretty heavy-handed, never mind, their grammar and spelling proclivities! So, I found your story fun and delightful, imaginative and nicely thought-out! Keep up the good work! If you don't mind my saying so, if you write on a computer, as I do, get a good "spell-check" software disk, and install it. Most of your spelling difficulties will end ---- they did for me!

Bryan at bryans616@aol.com

AKA "Byron" on the EA roster...

P.S. Your EA function, wherein one can supposedly email you directly to the above listed address, bounced-back to me, undelivered from Yahoo...

I, too, really enjoyed the story. It's nice to have a mix of shorter, fun pieces along with the longer more character driven ones. Michaelovsky, you did a great job capturing the feelings and events in your story. What can I say, I am also a sucker for a guillotine and enjoyed the imaginative ending.

I enjoyed it a lot too ... I should have posted something sooner! :-\

I hope you keep writing in the penectomy genre!

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