Gan Eden – A Rough Story Outline

Adam walks through the Garden of Eden – Gan Eden. He is naked and alone and innocent. Power and grace are his as he strides with feral energy through the lush clinging growth of the Garden.

A fragile and elegant butterfly settles on his genitals.

Adam is pleased by the gentle caresses of the butterfly.

The butterfly turns into a masculine angel, radiant and splendid, nuzzling Adam’s penis and fondling his testicles.

Adam and the angel lock eyes as Adam’s joy mounts. All is silent in the garden.

Just before Adam is to reach orgasm for the first time, the angel stops and asks Adam to choose between becoming a man and completing his ecstasy, or relapsing to the peace and solitude and innocence he has known.

Overcome by his passion, Adam chooses completion.

The angel leads Adam to a powerful and prolonged orgasm.

As his orgasm subsides, Adam looks down to see the angel become a great black bird of prey with piercing eyes.

Clasping Adam’s thighs in his talons, the bird pecks and tears until Adam’s genitals are mutilated beyond hope of healing. Adam will never know orgasm again. Adam’s screams go unheard; his blood is washed away in the clear stream that rushes through Gan Eden.

Shocked and glassy eyed, Adam is numb. All his joy is lost. All his hope is gone. He is as he was before, but now he knows what he has lost. The garden is no longer beautiful for him.

God walks in the garden. He comes upon Adam, and Adam cries out against God for granting him such joy only to betray Adam’s faith and deny his hope.

God answers that “I have given you the knowledge of good and evil, of joy and pain. Had I let you take joy at will, you would be as I am. Thou shalt not.”

Weeping, Adam prostrates himself and kisses God’s feet. “I submit. I submit myself to you,” he says.

And that was the Fall.

Hmmm...

That was different.

Where's Eve fit in?

A-1

Well, I wasn't trying for sameness. Who's Eve?

e

who bares about a singlr rib?!

With barbecue sauce, that rib is well lost. Perhaps the angel was Eve disguised - Adam will never know, nor should he care, for "vengeance is mine, saith the Lord."

e

serb (imported) wrote: Fri Jun 25, 2004 12:27 pm who bares about a singlr rib?!

Well, silly, I DO!

I simply LOVE to lick women's bones. Especially their Pubic bones... He'd have to cut out my tongue to stop me...

heh heh heh...

Really, seriously, though, I love 'em.... :hearthrob

A-1

A-1, do you mean bones encased in living flesh, or remnants, soup bones, and mortuary discards? If the latter, please submit your name to the appropriate law enforcement agency, or at least hit yourself in the head. If the former, bon appetit! Does your name refer to the steak sauce? When I was a wee lad, my grandmother used to say I looked "good enough to eat." Perhaps she foresaw my encounter with A-1.

Well,

IT is the same bones that I like to "jump", ... as in "jump their bones". Just an old, worn out phrase.

A-1 was shortened from Anonymous+1 at some point in the past. It was kind of a joke. IT was by some person named "Wendy". I believe that she was a he, but it was cyber-space and it didn't really matter. I miss Wendy, wherever or whoever she might be. We wrote some GREAT stories back and forth, we did, yep!!!

So that is the true skinny, and I am sticking to it. No offense, but I don't do boys or men, just women and legal girls...but only live, conscious ones...but only when I am "up" to it...

A-1

I'm glad I won't be seeing you lurking around any graveyards, A-1.

Yes, bobov,

The dead give bad head.

A-1