Very good, excellent, outstanding! Thank you, Abelard!!!

SquirmEWorm (imported) wrote: Wed May 12, 2004 12:36 am Very good, excellent, outstanding! Thank you, Abelard!!!

The only thing that marred this truly mind-bogglingly good story was this climactic sentence:

"So great was the pleasure and the anticipation that I was only vaguely aware of what Felicity was doing behind me, injecting my balls and massaging them until I finally came in a great spurt all over Sarah's breasts and face."

which I felt would have fit better with the continuity of the narrative if it had been phrased something like this:

"So great was the pleasure and the anticipation that I was only vaguely aware of what Felicity was doing behind me, opening my sac and squeezing out my balls, until I finally came in a great spurt all over Sarah's breasts and face."

I'd love to hear Abelard's thoughts on this.

I realize I'm just talking to myself here, but I really love this story. It has just the right mix of seduction and trickery.

Early on, the veterinary castratrix, Felicity Lawson, tells our hero that she's on her way out to a friend's farm to geld a colt, and invites him to pitch in and help out. Our hero shyly admits that he wouldn't mind watching but he doesn't want to get "too involved". This is just exquisite fore shadowing of his subsequent surrender to a deep castration urge, and the castratrix picks up on it immediately.

Anyway, that line about "I don't mind watching but I don't want to get too involved" just seems so familiar. I could have sworn I read that somewhere else, and with pretty much the same narrative implications. Anyway, it's really inspiring. I can well imagine a whole genre of castration stories about shy men timidly admitting to confident, dominant women that they like to watch, but are afraid of what might happen if they allowed themselves to become too involved.

Once again, excellent story for those of us who enjoy female domination and who can't really get into some of the more extreme scenes featured here such as penectomy and nullification. But to each his own, right?