Enjoyed the story very much.

Should Josh get cut? I would say yes.

A bit of backgroud as why/how it was acceptable to be 'done' in the country would be nice.

Of course he should be "fixed" because that is what it is all about. Must say I enjoyed the quality of diologue and story building which has made a most refreshing change from late. Look forward to next instalments.

Quillman UK

Hi,

Guess I'm sort of a newbie here...and at posting stuff...but I did happen to read this story. I'm with Astromancer...Josh should get to avoid the knife. On the other hand, since he's a bit of a snot, a little scare wouldn't hurt his ego.