Women's Machete Competition
Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2004 4:39 pm
Great story line; well-written prose.
I don't know how I managed to miss this story, given all those I've read on the EA. Hard to believe it was posted over three years ago, and today is my first time reading it.
It's great as it stands now, but personally, I wish it could have been the men's wives who were doing the cutting. That would make it conform better to our (my wife and I) own fantasy. Not a negative comment in any way, though. The story is very good.
I don't know how I managed to miss this story, given all those I've read on the EA. Hard to believe it was posted over three years ago, and today is my first time reading it.
It's great as it stands now, but personally, I wish it could have been the men's wives who were doing the cutting. That would make it conform better to our (my wife and I) own fantasy. Not a negative comment in any way, though. The story is very good.