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Lucinda part 2
Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 9:27 am
by topbazuka (imported)
your ending of this story was terribly dissapointing. your started out great and then left everyone hanging. if your heroin lusted for young balls she should have taken them and you should have described how. perhaps next time youll take time in preparing a justfiable ending to your story.
Re: Lucinda part 2
Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 7:53 pm
by Tom Fletcher (imported)
I, for one, didn't sense that we were at an end. Perhaps you should give the author a chance to complete his/her story.
I wonder if you might have a contribution to the story board yourself?
topbazuka (imported) wrote: Thu Feb 12, 2004 9:27 am
your ending of this story was terribly dissapointing. your started out great and then left everyone hanging. if your heroin lusted for young balls she should have taken them and you should have described how. perhaps next time youll take time in preparing a justfiable ending to your story.
Re: Lucinda part 2
Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2004 12:55 pm
by A-1 (imported)
Hmmm...
My heroin always lusted for large veins. I always seemed to have one, too.
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