Nathan has outdone himself this time with the above story. Crime and punishment, and written so well that you'll be squirming in your seat long before you're done with it!
One Felon's Perspective
One Felon's Perspective
http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/P/ea_174619the_phys.htm
Nathan has outdone himself this time with the above story. Crime and punishment, and written so well that you'll be squirming in your seat long before you're done with it!
Nathan has outdone himself this time with the above story. Crime and punishment, and written so well that you'll be squirming in your seat long before you're done with it!
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Re: One Felon's Perspective
I've received a lot of feedback on this story, and more than a few requests to do more with it. I like the elements, and there are a number of possibilities. Crime and punishment are two powerful ideas, and a story that deals with the punishment of a criminal can be very very intense.
Some asked me why I allowed the doctor to numb up the guy's cock before taking his foreskin. I wanted to add realism, and the way I visulaized it I just thought that going to see the prison doctor in the prison clinic would be more of a medical procedure, where punishment would not be the objective. We like our doctors to be sympathtic. That's one reason the castrator is not a medical doctor. Getting circumcised as an adult would not be enjoyable, no matter what, and especially if you knew you were going to be castrated at some point too. Having someone take off your foreskin against your will, while you were tied and helpless, would in a small way, be almost like being unmanned. Strapped down and helpless, and begging for them not to take your foreskin would be a terrible feeling, even if it wasn't a totally painful one. I wanted to portray the gay doctor feeling for the frustrated young man, getting him off and taking his foreskin with care, partly because he felt it was needed, and partly because he wanted to.
It had the added benifit to contrast the actual castration with the visit to the clinic. I especially liked the teenage employee, obviously turned on by what he does, and "playing" with the prisoner when the physician's assistant was out of the room.
Anyway, I'm thinking of other ideas, but I'm intrigued with the many suggestions I've received. One reader, who goes by "Topper" had a multitude of ideas, some of which actually led me to write it as I did. Unfortunately, his email address seems corrupted, and I wasn't able to return his letters.
Again, thanks to those that respond. It means a lot, and I appreciate it.
--Nathan
Some asked me why I allowed the doctor to numb up the guy's cock before taking his foreskin. I wanted to add realism, and the way I visulaized it I just thought that going to see the prison doctor in the prison clinic would be more of a medical procedure, where punishment would not be the objective. We like our doctors to be sympathtic. That's one reason the castrator is not a medical doctor. Getting circumcised as an adult would not be enjoyable, no matter what, and especially if you knew you were going to be castrated at some point too. Having someone take off your foreskin against your will, while you were tied and helpless, would in a small way, be almost like being unmanned. Strapped down and helpless, and begging for them not to take your foreskin would be a terrible feeling, even if it wasn't a totally painful one. I wanted to portray the gay doctor feeling for the frustrated young man, getting him off and taking his foreskin with care, partly because he felt it was needed, and partly because he wanted to.
It had the added benifit to contrast the actual castration with the visit to the clinic. I especially liked the teenage employee, obviously turned on by what he does, and "playing" with the prisoner when the physician's assistant was out of the room.
Anyway, I'm thinking of other ideas, but I'm intrigued with the many suggestions I've received. One reader, who goes by "Topper" had a multitude of ideas, some of which actually led me to write it as I did. Unfortunately, his email address seems corrupted, and I wasn't able to return his letters.
Again, thanks to those that respond. It means a lot, and I appreciate it.
--Nathan