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The Changeling vs The Grand Masters Plan - a challenge to writers and authors..*S*
Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 9:42 pm
by DoMinator59 (imported)
Hi A/all, I just read "The Changeling" - good stuff!!! I really liked how the young soldier was described as "going over" during a session with his "Mistress" and how, after that time, with the help of the hormones, he began to get into his new life and look forward to the punishments. His eventual fate was not t a total surprise but it did bring the story to where, if the writer was to continue it from that opint on in great detail, it could easily be a match for The Grand Masters Plan. While this story is good, I still find "The Grand Masters Plan" to be the best that I have ever read. The story of how a once straight guy is brought into the fold and gives his balls willingly to his Master is a turn on second to none that I have found in any of the stories. Again, it would be fantastic if the writer were to continue to tell of Gary's evolving character - perhaps to where he is made to be like the character Patty in the story. I'm getting hard just writing this and thinking about where the story could go from where it stopped... So, any takers to continue these stories?? Hmmmmmmmmmmm?? *wink* ANyone who agrees with Me on these issues should make thier points known. DoMinator59
Re: The Changeling vs The Grand Masters Plan - a challenge to writers and authors..*S*
Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2003 2:02 pm
by frb (imported)
DoMinator59 (imported) wrote: Thu Nov 13, 2003 9:42 pm
Hi A/all, I just read "The Changeling" - good stuff!!! I really liked how the young soldier was described as "going over" during a session with his "Mistress" and how, after that time, with the help of the hormones, he began to get into his new life and look forward to the punishments. His eventual fate was not t a total surprise but it did bring the story to where, if the writer was to continue it from that opint on in great detail, it could easily be a match for The Grand Masters Plan. While this story is good, I still find "The Grand Masters Plan" to be the best that I have ever read. The story of how a once straight guy is brought into the fold and gives his balls willingly to his Master is a turn on second to none that I have found in any of the stories. Again, it would be fantastic if the writer were to continue to tell of Gary's evolving character - perhaps to where he is made to be like the character Patty in the story. I'm getting hard just writing this and thinking about where the story could go from where it stopped... So, any takers to continue these stories?? Hmmmmmmmmmmm?? *wink* ANyone who agrees with Me on these issues should make thier points known. DoMinator59
Nice to know someone read the story. I did not read the Grand Masters Plan, so will go do that right now and see what happens. Anyone who wishes to continue the changling is welcome to, as the characters have exhausted my interest. One thing to keep in mind is that Lotta, is not into bondage and discipline as a turn on, rather as a means to and end. She appears to have the ability to see latent traits in individuals which make them aminable to this sort of training.
frb