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Nut Cutting Fetish part 1
Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2003 2:01 pm
by Hot (imported)
That is a good story. Please give us part 2
Re: Nut Cutting Fetish part 1
Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2003 4:35 pm
by Paolo
The only fault I find with this story is the quotation punctuations.
Example: "It makes me hot," she said.
Notice the comma inside the quote.
Other than that, it was very nice. Hoping to see part 2 soon.
