I have a brochure
Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 9:36 am
Hello all
I'm new here and I'm not sure if I'm in the right place. My problem is, I have to do a brochure to promote my business but I'm not Native English speaker. Could anybody read through it and give me some comment, please.
Welcome to VASITA
The quest for good health and beauty through meditation massage. Discover m and the benefits of therapies based on traditional Thai and modern Western techniques. Using pressure, muscle stretching and compression, and are practised in gentle, rhythmic, rocking movements on the energy lines are. Experience these traditions, handed down through countless generations, here at VASITA, has become an oasis of peace and tranquillity. Soothe away the stress of modern life and dissolve impurities under the gentle fingers of therapists trained in ancient skills. The benefits to body and mind will be obvious.
The power of touch, an ancient art of healing
It is essentially a healing massage and after a few sessions changes are noticeable on the followings:
pain and muscle tension are relieved
strengthens and rejuvenates the body
Blood and lymphatic circulation are improved
frees blocked energy flows
Increases flexibility through passive yoga postures
Increases ability to absorb food due to internal massaging effect to various organs
It is especially helpful in relieving certain specific ailments including headaches, migraines, arthitis, whiplash and back pain. When combined with a healthy diet and regular exercise, it can make a real difference to one's general health and mental attitude.
Treat yourself with our way
Traditional Massage(60 minutes)
Base on Thai massage. Using pressure on the energy lines, muscle stretching, rhythmic movements. Wearing Thai style pyjamas, which you are provided. Tension and stress will be replaced by feeling full of energy.
East meet West(60 minutes)
Enjoy 45 minutes on Traditional Massage and the rest, oil is used on Swedish massage techniques to leave you with a feeling of lightness.
Get to the point(30 minutes)
Relieving certain specific ailments, pain and muscle tension.
I'm new here and I'm not sure if I'm in the right place. My problem is, I have to do a brochure to promote my business but I'm not Native English speaker. Could anybody read through it and give me some comment, please.
Welcome to VASITA
The quest for good health and beauty through meditation massage. Discover m and the benefits of therapies based on traditional Thai and modern Western techniques. Using pressure, muscle stretching and compression, and are practised in gentle, rhythmic, rocking movements on the energy lines are. Experience these traditions, handed down through countless generations, here at VASITA, has become an oasis of peace and tranquillity. Soothe away the stress of modern life and dissolve impurities under the gentle fingers of therapists trained in ancient skills. The benefits to body and mind will be obvious.
The power of touch, an ancient art of healing
It is essentially a healing massage and after a few sessions changes are noticeable on the followings:
pain and muscle tension are relieved
strengthens and rejuvenates the body
Blood and lymphatic circulation are improved
frees blocked energy flows
Increases flexibility through passive yoga postures
Increases ability to absorb food due to internal massaging effect to various organs
It is especially helpful in relieving certain specific ailments including headaches, migraines, arthitis, whiplash and back pain. When combined with a healthy diet and regular exercise, it can make a real difference to one's general health and mental attitude.
Treat yourself with our way
Traditional Massage(60 minutes)
Base on Thai massage. Using pressure on the energy lines, muscle stretching, rhythmic movements. Wearing Thai style pyjamas, which you are provided. Tension and stress will be replaced by feeling full of energy.
East meet West(60 minutes)
Enjoy 45 minutes on Traditional Massage and the rest, oil is used on Swedish massage techniques to leave you with a feeling of lightness.
Get to the point(30 minutes)
Relieving certain specific ailments, pain and muscle tension.