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Would someone please answer my thread here. I would really like some feedback and answers here please.

I'm sorry that you're not getting any over your story; as a rule, I very seldom start a thread, or offer subjective feedback on stories. I get accussed of favoritism if I do.

Hopefully someone will speak up. It's an ongoing problem of trying to get readers to say something. I suppose that they're afraid that someone will find out who they are if they attempt feedback.

For what it's worth, sorry...:-\

Although I read your story in response to your request for feedback, it wasn't a story I would have otherwise read. That doesn't mean that it was a bad story; it just wasn't one that appealed to me. You probably wouldn't like my stories. Tastes are different, so I would have difficulty responding to the story.

Reader response is always poor. I have yet to receive a response to my latest story. From what you said, you've received quite a few hits. Sometimes one has to be satisfied with that. I could critique your writing-but, I'm no expert. What kind of response do you want, and where do you want it-here, or by email?

Something else you might consider: few of the readers of the stories ever visit this board. Only we authors, hungry for feedback check it regularly

I agree with what slammr said.....feedback just isn't currently happening. I don't know how to fix it either...would be nice if there was some way people could at least rate a story that they read. I've written about four stories recently without getting any comments, and by now, I've just gotten used to it.

When I wrote the Halloween tale I thought that would generate SOMETHING. But it didn't. My only suggestion or you would be to list your email if you want feedback. I get more feedback from email than I do from this posting area. By far.

-Nathan

I agree with what both Slammr and Nathan have said about feedback. As with Slammr, I would not give a story such as yours more than a cursory glance, so I do not feel that it would be fair to make a comment.

Similarly, I started to read the Slammr's story to which he refers. Normally, I enjoy his writing but on this occasion having read about 3 paragraphs I realised that the format was one I find particularly irritating and stopped at that point. What sort of post should I make? I am sure that the story is excellent, but it is just not for me. In the same way, Nathan's Halloween story is clever. He manages to be both prolific and inventive, but once again not my taste.

If I read a story which I find interesting then I will make a post and what I say will be meant sincerely. I will definitely not post unless I can say something positive and I think that most people here would rather keep quiet than cause offence by criticising someone's effort.

The best that I can do is to say thank you, for at least trying.

Apologies,

If no one wants to give any feedback on the stories themselves, what about the other question I asked.

I'm trying to come up with an image of what Dr. Goddess looks like and of what Allisyn looks like. Does anyone have an actress, female model, or female celebrity they think could be Dr. Goddess or they think could be Allisyn? Does anyone have any pictures of a woman they think could be Dr. Goddess or a girl they think could be Allisyn? If so, please post them here.

I wrote the story Castrated Like A Pig By A Teenage Farm Girl, and I noticed that a number of people have read the story.

I would appreciate some feedback on it. I would really like to have some readers post here or send me a personal message and let me know what you think of this story.

If you're looking for feedback, this is probably the wrong place to post your stories. My all-time favorite of those posted under my username has received no feedback whatsoever, although it's been read several thousand times. I posted it on another Website about a month ago, and have already received over 100 reviews and comments.

Whenever I post anything to the EA, it's with the understanding that my only reason for doing so is to give some pleasure to those who enjoy reading it. I no longer expect feedback, so am not disappointed when it doesn't happen.

Liked your story,for the most part, however a point of interest I might mention, was your lack of any reference to the audio sound levels associated with hogs in general

(ie. squealing)

Having been raised on a farm and having done all the essentials of your story, one thing,s for certain, there,s always lots of noise associated with farm animals, especially hogs.

Most people have heard the saying

"Squeal, like a stuck pig"

This being very true of the butchering process, I might add, he also squeals just as loud. when he is orgasming and most definately when he's having his balls cut off.

Some mention of this in the narrative of the story would have added much more colour.