Your story is fascinating in the best Shirley Jones tradition, however, it's a grammatical nightmare laced with spelling errors that ruin it.

Clean it up, please. I'm sure everyone would enjoy it.

Paolo,

I don't want to step on your toes here, but let me just throw in my two cents.

Guys, please lay off the snuff stories. There are archives and websites out there just for snuff themed stories. The EA is not one of them. IF you write a snuff themed story that doesn't mean it won't get posted ... that's up to Paolo, but be forewarned that if we get a lot of snuff submissions we will draw the line at some point.

As far as I am concerned it's not a castration story if the guy getting castrated doesn't get to hang around and enjoy it

Paolo wrote: Thu Oct 02, 2003 1:12 pm Your story is fascinating in the best Shirley Jones tradition, however, it's a grammatical nightmare laced with spelling errors that ruin it.

Clean it up, please. I'm sure everyone would enjoy it.

You know what they say about great minds.

I was beginning to get tired of all the death and snuff and carnage of late, too, BUT I didn't say anything.

What remarkable restraint you show,paolo!