Carmen and Me, Chapter 8, by A-1

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I just read Carmen and Me, Chapter 8, by A-1 http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/C/ea_10418carmen_a.htm

and got quite hard at Danny's description of how he was being tormented on the plane ride by Carmen and Diedre. The story got much more interesting when they arrive at the nullification villa and Danny's package is put into full chastity and he is handcuffed for all at the resort to see his plight.

All in all, a good storyline, only minor grammatical errors that only slightly tarnish the flow of the story. A very good read - I'm looking for the rest of the series now.