To the Author of "Fish Bait"

[Paolo]

Your story is not suitable for posting at EA in its current plot-condition. It has to have a castration element to it, moreso than it does.

I would have sent a private email, but the address wasn't sent with the story.

If you'd like to work in a castration plot for it, by all means, do so.

Thanks.

[Unregistered (imported)]

hmmm, makes me wonder what the story was about.

Balls as bait?