Is it me or the weather, but I can't make heads or tales out of Baby Shower...tying up loose ends. What is going on? Everyone reads it. Who is Mikey? Is there a baby in there getting seriously circumcised? What?

Ya got me grabbed.

I let it out on a technicality.

I think it's about time to up the standards of what gets posted here, whether it makes anyone scream or not.

Sorry, thought that a note had been entered that the story wouldn't make sense unless you read the first story by the same primary title.

frb

No wonder I was confused.

Between all the different languages and computers and such that I've had to deal with today, I'm lucky I got this far!

No offense intended, frb.

It's been one of those days.

No offense taken. My age sometimes gets me confused between what I intend to do and what is actually done. Technically it is CRS that has gotten me.

frb

frb (imported) wrote: Tue Jun 24, 2003 3:53 pm Sorry, thought that a note had been entered that the story wouldn't make sense unless you read the first story by the same primary title.

frb

AHA! So there is a previous story that would make this one make sense. Thank you. If you want to talk "aging," grab a cup of hot toddy and sit down with me here by the fire. I will look for the previous ones, frb. The puzzlement was that you are such a good writer but there were these gaps in the story.

But in general i think it would be nice if the overall editing quality of most of the stories would become a reality. Some of those things are annoying to read to the point I tend to shy away unless it is a writer like nathan or pueros or one of the ones "proven" to take the time to publish something readable.

In the future shall endeavor to be more careful and add chapters to long stories.

As to age, when it was said 'Let there be light.' I threw the switch in squad bay two.

frb