The Move

[BroBear (imported)]

I really enjoyed "The Move".

In fact I would love to see a prequill of what happened to Dan, and how tuck town adopted this custom.

I would also enjoy following the Mark and Joe as they deal with the world locally and outside of tuck town. As well as things like long term psychology of the brothers and how the heck do the town folk have kids!

Any how...Good Work...Thanks

Steve BroBear:D

[Zoroaster (imported)]

Thanks...the story could have been fleshed out a lot more but I just got impatient with it. I'm thinking about a sequel for when they go to college or something but haven't really worked it all out yet.