German Story need help

[DrSad (imported)]

Hi,

i´n now writing a story about an orphanage that does castration and medical experiments on boys, and make some body-modificaition on them.

The Story is written in german, and i´m not good enouth to translate it to english.

I also need a lector for the german part

Ideas and wishes for that story are welcome.

DrSad

[ringlo (imported)]

I'm not experienced as a beta reader and my english isn't that good but if I can be of any assistance with the german part please feel free to contact me.

ringlo