An All Around Improvement

[Asian Master (imported)]

Good story, really: it makes me cum, even if it is a bit too bloody for me (and a bit too consensual: the boy is not enough in denial against what happens to him). Well written. But how about a sequel? Now that the boy is so well improved, what will his father do with him? Probably, if he puts him up for sale, he can take a very good price from a such modified teen. And certainly the father would like this new kind of frustration imposed to his son: not only not being able to relieve his body from its torturing excess of hormones, to have any masturbatory pleasure, but also obliged to be a thing used for the pleasure of others.

Mikael

[Unregistered (imported)]

A link to the original story:

http://groups.google.com/groups?q=dad+c ... Net&rnum=2

Perhaps this won't be so bloody!

The new version is quite nice though.

[Paolo]

Of course, the author's email could have changed, but the original has a different one than the version submitted here.

A reminder - if you see a story on another site that you think would be of interest to Archive readers and on-topic, post a link to it or make sure that you get the Author's permission to repost it here.

Benefit of the doubt applies here ... but copying some else's work and changing it a bit isn't exactly original fiction.

Thanks.

[Asian Master (imported)]

The original version is far less interesting: more bloody and no penectomy!

Mikael