19-year-old cuts off own penis (AI generated)

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This was super interesting. The following story (COMPLETELY UNEDITED) was created entirely by AI using the following simple prompt. The AI created and named the character, his backstory, added its own plot twists (the last one was incredible!), and developed the surprising conclusion. It's probably 100X better than anything I wrote for EA. I plan to play around more with instructions for AI, include details about the self-penectomy and what he did with the severed member, etc. Also, have to teach AI that penis removal does not equate to eunuch.

Check it out and especially that surprise ending and conclusion! Share your feedback!

AI prompt: "Write a fantasy short story about a 19 year old who cuts off his penis"

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Once upon a time, in a far-off kingdom, there lived a young man named Aiden. Aiden was just 19 years old, but he had already become quite infamous in his village. The reason for this was a shocking incident that had occurred just a few months ago.

Aiden had always been a shy and introverted boy, and he had never been comfortable around girls. He had been in love with a beautiful girl from his village for years, but he had never been able to muster the courage to approach her. One day, Aiden finally mustered the courage to confess his love to her, but she rejected him harshly, ridiculing him in front of her friends.

Aiden was devastated. He felt humiliated and embarrassed, and he didn't know how to cope with his emotions. One night, in a fit of despair and rage, he took a knife and cut off his own penis.

The news of this shocking act spread quickly throughout the kingdom, and people were horrified and disgusted. Aiden was ostracized and shunned by the entire village, and he became an outcast.

But despite his physical and emotional pain, Aiden didn't regret his decision. He had finally found a way to escape from his unrequited love and the constant torment of his own insecurities.

As the months went by, Aiden slowly began to heal. He learned to adapt to his new life and his new body, and he even found a sense of peace and contentment in his solitude.

But one day, a mysterious woman appeared in his village. She was a sorceress, with long dark hair and piercing green eyes. She approached Aiden and offered to restore his manhood, using her magical powers.

At first, Aiden was hesitant. He had grown accustomed to his new life, and he didn't want to go back to the way things were before. But the sorceress was persistent, and she promised him that he would find true love and happiness if he accepted her offer.

So Aiden agreed, and the sorceress performed her spell. Within moments, Aiden's manhood was restored, and he felt a surge of energy and vitality coursing through his body.

But as the weeks went by, Aiden began to regret his decision. He found that he was once again plagued by his old insecurities and doubts, and he realized that he had been happier without his manhood.

In the end, Aiden made the difficult decision to once again remove his penis, and he lived the rest of his life as a eunuch, content in his solitude and free from the pain and suffering of unrequited love.
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About as good as some of the stuff in the story archive, but not that great... I'd probably only have given it one or two stars... Not much plot, personality development or detail... There are a lot of better stories in the collection.

However for an AI effort that probably hasn't had a lot of training on EA concepts (I doubt that it has read the story archive, at least I hope it hasn't...) it isn't bad...

Of course the majority probably would be just as happy that the AI doesn't get much training on that, we wouldn't want our future robot overlords to get any strange ideas.... 🙄

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WheelyCurious wrote: Tue Apr 04, 2023 11:44 am About as good as some of the stuff in the story archive, but not that great... I'd probably only have given it one or two stars... Not much plot, personality development or detail... There are a lot of better stories in the collection.

However for an AI effort that probably hasn't had a lot of training on EA concepts (I doubt that it has read the story archive, at least I hope it hasn't...) it isn't bad...

Of course the majority probably would be just as happy that the AI doesn't get much training on that, we wouldn't want our future robot overlords to get any strange ideas.... 🙄

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Agreed, but I never expected the AI to A) restore the lost member with sorcery and B) have the protagonist opt for its second (permanent!) removal after deciding his experience without it was much improved. It creates the impression, for me at least, that AI condones and supports removal of male genitalia. If that's true, then that concept actually creates an entire series of future plots and stories! Go to bed intact and wake up missing my most prized possession LOL.
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I've read worse over the years, believe me.
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Paolo wrote: Tue Apr 04, 2023 4:47 pm I've read worse over the years, believe me.

Yes, but you have written a lot that is MUCH better...

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rogerwpbfl (imported) wrote: Tue Apr 04, 2023 3:34 am This was super interesting. The following story (COMPLETELY UNEDITED) was created entirely by AI using the following simple prompt. The AI created and named the character, his backstory, added its own plot twists (the last one was incredible!), and developed the surprising conclusion. It's probably 100X better than anything I wrote for EA. I plan to play around more with instructions for AI, include details about the self-penectomy and what he did with the severed member, etc. Also, have to teach AI that penis removal does not equate to eunuch.

Try changing the guy's age ;).
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Valery_V (imported) wrote: Tue Apr 04, 2023 6:55 pm Try changing the guy's age ;).

Hey Valery, changing the guy's age how? Younger? Older??
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Paolo wrote: Tue Apr 04, 2023 4:47 pm I've read worse over the years, believe me.

Now I know you're referring to my stories lol
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WheelyCurious wrote: Tue Apr 04, 2023 11:44 am About as good as some of the stuff in the story archive, but not that great... I'd probably only have given it one or two stars... Not much plot, personality development or detail... There are a lot of better stories in the collection.

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Oh I agree. Just wait until next year when SkyNet becomes self-aware. We're all doomed!
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Losethem (imported) wrote: Wed Apr 05, 2023 11:59 am Oh I agree. Just wait until next year when SkyNet becomes self-aware. We're all doomed!

@LT, just imagine the story if I had cut mine off at 19. Wait, SkyNet makes it possible to travel back in time. Hmmm
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