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Requesting feedback for my "furry" themed story!
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2022 6:04 am
by Fancyfeller (imported)
Hi! ^^
I recently posted a new "furry" themed naughty story called "In Which Master Goat and the Famous Cock Part Company", and would greatly appreciate any comments/feedback on it!
Linky:
https://eunuchworld.co/s16383
Re: Requesting feedback for my "furry" themed story!
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2022 9:50 pm
by WheelyCurious
Not quite to my taste, but a good story. Well written....
I don't know enough about 'furry' to comment on the likelihood of that aspect of it, but seemed reasonable. Dialog was reasonable.
I'm not real into 'play-by-play' action coverage, (I burned out on that years ago reading the 'true confession stories' in the men's magazines I encountered on various jobs....) but that is a personal taste question, it didn't seem that the action was unreasonable.
WheelyCurious
Re: Requesting feedback for my "furry" themed story!
Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2022 9:14 am
by Fancyfeller (imported)
@WheelyCurious - Thanks for your comment! I guess that probably is a matter of personal taste, as you say - I personally do like to go into a lot of detail when it comes to describing a character's cutting!