Nathan's Halloween story

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Nathan's Halloween story

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Nathan--

Again and again you thrill me to the core. Not just anyone can pull off a Halloween story that is both scary and stimulating. You've done it again: aroused my libido.

I just want to thank you for using your time and talent to creat stories for the rest of us to get off on. It's always a thrill when I see your name in the author column. So keep up the good work. You are appreciated.

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Thanks for the compliment. This story just sorta "came" to me...the idea of it all like a flash in the night. I could see it...visualize it. It all started with an email, and a picture, and the picture gave me the creeps and then once I had the feeling the story just happened.

Ah, what was the picture you ask? Well, remember, it was Halloween night, and I got this photo in the mail from my brother and it depicts what they claim is a real ghost sitting by a window, whispering in a very low murmur. Yeah..I know...I'm as sceptical as the rest of you, but I did look, and at first I didnt see anything, much less hear anything. But, if you enlarge the image to full screen and study it for a while it just stands out and once you see it then its really obvious. Concentrate around the window and you will see it. I pushed up the volume and heard the damn thing, and thats when it all just gave me the chills and so I decided to start writing then and there.

Ok..OK...yeah...the picture that started the story. Its loaded here, if anyone is interested:

<http://home.attbi.com/~n9ivo/whatswrong.swf>

Again, thanks for the note. I enjoyed this one, the story and all of it, and I hope others will too even though Halloween has past.

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Nathan, the gangs, balls, dinner story was intense, real and powerfuil. How did you do that, using the food to build the mood, bujild the eroticism, make a guyh stop caring like the captured leader, and just let it happen. Wow. Wow. Wow.
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Post by Charlieje (imported) »

Well, another use for the reviews. Somehow I missed the Halloween story until I saw the start of this thread, so I went back and read it this morning. Another GREAT short story by Nathan. Man, I don't know how you keep coming up with these ideas, Nathan!

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