Allen,

Loved the story. Makes me want to brush up on my pinball skills. Don't know about the rest of the archive irregulars, but if you write part 2 I would like to read it.

Arcane

I remember having one of those machines to dismantle. I always liked to take things apart, I wa never good at putting them back together.

Dave

This is a great story!

Thanks!

MORE! MORE! MORE! and Thanks for a great story.

That was a great story, and it appears quite a bit of thought went into it. I've been thinking of a similar story with nearly the same amount of plot twists. I just have not had the time to write it.

Pin-Ball Willy's is definately one of the more original "shorts" I've seen here in a long time.

Thanks for writing!

"Pin-Ball Willy" is a great story with a very interesting and well developed plot.

Thank you, Allen!

ringlo

Thanks all for the response to the story. I write mostly for my own (erotic) pleasure. But it's great to know that others also found the story of interest. I appreciate all the encouraging remarks.

I enjoyed this story more than any in a while. A great plot. I especially like stories where the protagonist's desires evolve. Nice work!

Really wonderful story with a fantastic build-up. Great fun to read!

vorpal