Great story as ever, even without explicit scene. I wish to learn more about Santiago's dad.

PS: where are the old topics from this forum section?

If you scroll down the page a little, to the lower left with be a line that says something like "show threads from..." and just to the right of that, a drop-down box where you can select the time frame to display threads.

Oh, thank you Paolo!

Thank you IncestCirc

Since I'm often plagued with self doubt any feed back at all is encouraging. There are so many story lines I want to return to.

Atreyu

I wish you would!

I have loved all your work!!��

Thank you to everyone who posted.

I just submitted Part 5 and it's, how shall I put this, a bit more graphic.

Atreyu

I appreciate the grafic content, but your stories always keeps me on the edge! Sometimes I need to reach the climax. I hope to read soon about his loss

The question I wonder about is if San Carlos Island really existed when I was a boy would I have sold myself to it? If I had summer and winter vacations off and if I'd been given a few thousand dollars up front as a signing bonus I might well have!

What about you?

In that universe, the choice is up to the fathers! There are two very different dads in this story, Seth's Dad and San's Dad. Maybe they can talk for a while, maybe during a check up examination little before the ride in limo, and share experience about their sons and their little trip to San Carlos Island