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Wally World Chapter 6 and Bobby Ewing's "death".
Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2017 2:59 pm
by Atreyu69 (imported)
Dear Readers
A person who's opinion I value greatly has suggested that chapter 6 of Wally World might have been a bit too dark. Please let me know how you feel about it and don't worry about my feelings.
If the story has gone off track I've suggested that a can do a "Bobby Ewing dream sequence" sort of thing like they did on the TV show Dallas.
You know, that's where the writers decided the the previous season including Bobby Ewing's death was pretty much a complete disaster and so they simply said it was all a dream and started over.
It's sort of complicated when you consider that the "dream" was also mentioned in the spin off series "Knots Landing."
Anyway please let me know what you think. If you don't like chapters six and seven I can just say that Kayo had eaten an extra large pizza right before going to sleep and had a wicked nightmare. I can then go back to Chapter 5.
Please let me know what you think
Atreyu
Re: Wally World Chapter 6 and Bobby Ewing's "death".
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2017 1:26 pm
by Atreyu69 (imported)
I've received no negative remarks or PM's about Wally World being too dark so I'm hoping to see chapter 7 posted soon.
But please remember the reason I write for the EA is to try to please you the reader. If you have comments or feedback either good or bad let me know. Otherwise I'm flying blind.
Thank You
Atreyu
Re: Wally World Chapter 6 and Bobby Ewing's "death".
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2017 1:34 pm
by sparkey49 (imported)
I read aloof it so far and see no problems and have enjoyed them.
Re: Wally World Chapter 6 and Bobby Ewing's "death".
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2017 1:35 pm
by Paolo
...No feedback...
Not really surprising, is it?
For what it's worth, I have found that you have to listen to the characters. A bit of shameless self-promotion here, but Boys of Blue Creek ended up being so long because the characters had so much to say and do. Your story should go where THEY want it to go.
Re: Wally World Chapter 6 and Bobby Ewing's "death".
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2017 8:58 pm
by Ernie of Maine (imported)
Atreyu69 (imported) wrote: Sun Jul 16, 2017 1:26 pm
I've received no negative remarks or PM's about Wally World being too dark so I'm hoping to see chapter 7 posted soon.
But please remember the reason I write for the EA is to try to please you the reader. If you have comments or feedback either good or bad let me know. Otherwise I'm flying blind.
Thank You
Atreyu
AllI see is good story. So what is next.
At the cabin?
Re: Wally World Chapter 6 and Bobby Ewing's "death".
Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2017 5:21 pm
by Atreyu69 (imported)
At the Cabin Part 8 and Wally World Chapter 7 have just been submitted.
I hope they're posted soon.
Atreyu
Re: Wally World Chapter 6 and Bobby Ewing's "death".
Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2017 5:17 am
by ylpb7508 (imported)
Go for it!
Re: Wally World Chapter 6 and Bobby Ewing's "death".
Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2017 5:54 am
by bella (imported)
enjoyed them both, awaiting the next installments
Re: Wally World Chapter 6 and Bobby Ewing's "death".
Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2017 7:24 pm
by tempdownload (imported)
Atreyu69 (imported) wrote: Sat Jul 15, 2017 2:59 pm
Dear Readers
A person who's opinion I value greatly has suggested that chapter 6 of Wally World might have been a bit too dark. Please let me know how you feel about it and don't worry about my feelings.
If the story has gone off track I've suggested that a can do a "Bobby Ewing dream sequence" sort of thing like they did on the TV show Dallas.
You know, that's where the writers decided the the previous season including Bobby Ewing's death was pretty much a complete disaster and so they simply said it was all a dream and started over.
It's sort of complicated when you consider that the "dream" was also mentioned in the spin off series "Knots Landing."
Anyway please let me know what you think. If you don't like chapters six and seven I can just say that Kayo had eaten an extra large pizza right before going to sleep and had a wicked nightmare. I can then go back to Chapter 5.
Please let me know what you think
Atreyu
Would love if the next chapter can include the circumcised guy having his glans cap slowly amputated as well please?
Re: Wally World Chapter 6 and Bobby Ewing's "death".
Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2017 7:01 pm
by kwanmingmin (imported)
Please do write more on the series... Kayo's castration will be exciting for us...
You know, that's where the writers decided the the previous season including Bobby Ewing's death was pretty much a complete disaster and so they simply said it was all a dream and started over. 
It's sort of complicated when you consider that the "dream" was also mentioned in the spin off series "Knots Landing." 
