the bout

[noblee (imported)]

wow. that was easily one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work...

[deanglass (imported)]

I agree. This is one of the better stories I have seen. It would be great to see more of them on the same subject, but with more detail, maybe, to the physical beauty of the combatants. Keep up the good work.