Another great story by Nathan. I really do love to read his Ayzintion city stories.

The one down side to this story is you are left hanging in the very end wondering what happens to the lady, but other then that one minor detail, it is a great story.

I agree with Eric, a great story! Being new here I hadn't previously read any of Nathan's stories. I will immediately search the archives for more.

One of Nathan's best in the Ayzintion city series, in my opinion. I absolutely LOVE it when what goes around comes around.

Just a short note to say that I appreciated the comments. Most of my recent works haven't received any, and well, while I'm really not writing this stuff to seek comments, they are appreciated when they come.

Just wanted to say that, cause it does motivate a writer when he 'hits a chord' and generates the feedback and makes him write another.

Anyway, thanks...

Nathan,

Come off it you know you just love to have feed back, after all you are only human and why shouldn't you?

I must admit that I do not often post about your stories because they are a little too much for my taste, but I do admire your ability to tell a story. Whatever the subject, you manage to convey your meaning in a very few, well chosen words, so for once I am posting to say thank you for the effort. The subject may not entirely appeal to me, but each story is like a little gem - polished to the ultimate degree.

LOL

Erik (imported) wrote: Fri Sep 06, 2002 9:28 pm Another great story by Nathan. I really do love to read his Ayzintion city stories.

I've only read "The Castrated Cutter" and "A Slave called Messner" so far and Erik is right, these are really great stories.

Now I have to read also the rest of the series.

ringlo