So I have written my second story called "College Sports", but since my English is not very good and I know that I tend to make a lot of syntactical and expressional mistakes, would anyone(preferably American) be willing to take a look and point them out before I send it to the archives?

Thanks

You might be more likely to get help if you mention what type of story you are writing.

Oh right, straight genre with maledom. Is this what you asked?

I just sent you a private message, if you want to just email the story to me, I will do my best at proof reading it for you.

I've helped out our friend with the story and have read it and edited it for him. He did a darn good job of writing an English language story given English is a second language for him. I had to change the tense on some words and rework a few sentences, but overall even without that it was readable and readily understood by an English speaking audience.

Good Job g_boy222, it was a good read! I've e-mailed the edited version back to you.

--LT